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Kia ora Sarah, I agree it is interesting that the number of nails as well as the length of the popsicle stick changes the sound. I guess it affects the wavelength of sound that is produced. Can you play a tune on your kalimba? Mrs Krausse
Hi Sarah, I loved this because it was interesting, I think your Kalimba is very nice I can see you worked hard on it. How long did it take you to build?
ello. it me. J A C O B. Ok this is very interesting, I like how you've add making your instrument. I don't think theres anything wrong with th- hold up. wait a minute. the video is not work. and how long did it take you to build? Yeah cool. nice epic. what do I look like? A critic? okay bye
Kia ora Sarah. My name is Teylah and I attend Mangapapa school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I like how you have passion for kalimbas, also love how you have a creative mind. But maybe next time you could add more detail to your slide, Thank you.
Terrific work on the Portfolio, it does a great job at showing you the thought process in the creator's head.
And good job with adding the draft versions of the Xylophone as well, the footnotes were well-written.
I believe that your next step would be to add a paragraph regarding your decisions behind choosing a Xylophone as your instrument, outside of that, the Portfolio is very high quality.
I really like your slideshow, it has so much information and I can tell that you spent a lot of time on it. I really like how you included a lot of pictures too. Good job!
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Kia ora Sarah,
ReplyDeleteI agree it is interesting that the number of nails as well as the length of the popsicle stick changes the sound. I guess it affects the wavelength of sound that is produced. Can you play a tune on your kalimba?
Mrs Krausse
Hi Sarah, I loved this because it was interesting, I think your Kalimba is very nice I can see you worked hard on it. How long did it take you to build?
ReplyDeleteello. it me. J A C O B. Ok this is very interesting, I like how you've add making your instrument. I don't think theres anything wrong with th- hold up. wait a minute. the video is not work. and how long did it take you to build? Yeah cool. nice epic. what do I look like? A critic? okay bye
ReplyDeleteHi Sarah I love the slide, lots of facts and was great and I could tell this took a lot of time.
ReplyDeletehi sarah I love your peace of work keep it up.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Sarah. My name is Teylah and I attend Mangapapa school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I like how you have passion for kalimbas, also love how you have a creative mind. But maybe next time you could add more detail to your slide, Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI think you have enough evidence of your learning because you have your plan pretty clear and the process maybe photos of in the the woodwork room?
ReplyDeleteI have some pictures from the woodwork room, I will add them tonight
DeleteTerrific work on the Portfolio, it does a great job at showing you the thought process in the creator's head.
ReplyDeleteAnd good job with adding the draft versions of the Xylophone as well, the footnotes were well-written.
I believe that your next step would be to add a paragraph regarding your decisions behind choosing a Xylophone as your instrument, outside of that, the Portfolio is very high quality.
Good Job.
I really like your slideshow, it has so much information and I can tell that you spent a lot of time on it. I really like how you included a lot of pictures too. Good job!
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